Happy Hump Day!
It’s Wednesday…so that means it’s time for the Hump Day Hook, where writers get together and share little hooks of a WIP, a new release, or an older published work.
So head on over to the Hump Day Hook Blog and keep Hopping from Hook to Hook!
Today I’m going to share a paragraph from my WIP, Tempted. It’s book 1 of my new series, The Dark Hart Chronicles.
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He appeared totally at peace. His bare, broad shoulders were slightly curved, cradling the guitar with his elegant hands. His raven black head was bent over the instrument as he strummed through a melody. He abruptly stopped and scribbled quickly on music sheets that were strewn across the table. It was during his moment of writing that he must have felt the weight of my stare. He glanced up and his face broke into a wide grin. ”Savannah, come in.”
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I liked how lost he was in the music. Beautiful.
Ooh, I do love a passionate musician! Great hook, thanks for sharing.
Musicians are wonderful…love how wrapped up in it he was – but his joy at seeing her despite the interruption was lovely.
Coming from a musical background…I can definitely appreciate this. Nice hook!
Lovely snippet. You really can feel music
I am drawn to his raven hair, the intensity he feels toward his music, and his sunny greeting to her. It makes me want to know what happens next and more about their relationship.
Oh, I want to be Savannah! Great hook!
Great descriptions, great hook. Well done.
Ooh, I do like a man who can play the guitar… and write music!
Great use of description
Mmm he sounds scrummy!
YUMMY!!!! I loved that smile x
Wonderful description of him. Loved his smile and welcome and the way you hooked me into her world through him.
Sounds fab!
Aaaahhh, a musician and a guitarist…my favorite. I want more of this. Great hook!